I wrote a few versions of this poem on Twitter, and had differing opinions on the favorite. I actually like them all for different reasons. Which one do you like best?
Haiku 1
Grandma's last car was
my first, a sturdy old dodge dart, wind
resistant like her.
Haiku 2
Grandma's last car was
my first, a sturdy old dodge dart,
wind resistant like her.
Tanka
Grandma's last car
my first
sturdy Dodge Dart
wind resistant...
like her.
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Friday, September 18, 2009
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